begin anywhere
working backwards from
this low
(for example)
(no matter how dumped
you ...)
(how misty
you ...)
expect
some through-thought will arrive
a shuttle/shifter, e.g.:
‘let’s go somewhere
crowded, I feel
like a lot of people’
*
dropper,
drop through the city
nameless,
nearing completion
‘nothing I would
or would not change’
in this weave/fabric
Below: 'Fate of Zero'; computer-graphical study by Georg-Johan Lay (click image to enlarge).
Thursday, January 28, 2010
amor fati (2009)
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I like your zen-ness here, your openness to/acceptance of the karmic necessity of whatever happens during the writing process. Begin anywhere, trusting that some through-thought will occur to you. Though you didn't leave "dropper" in the weave/fabric, did you? Didn't you originally have "dropper/ drop through the city"? Which I thought was kind of cool: "drop" seemed to drop from "dropper." I imagined a giant medicine dropper bombarding a city. Now I have to think about your revision...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your thoughts, David.
ReplyDeleteAt this stage I've reverted back to "dropper / drop through the city", though of course nothing is fixed.
Loved it stu, thanks for it.
ReplyDeleteCheers, Mariana! Thanks for having a read. :)
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