Monday, January 04, 2010

impair (2010)


this head
---of shitty lyrics

will never believe
---the sky again

this deadhouse
---is vorpal

words frag up,
---walls fuzz

luck = picking up
---a discard

snorting failure
---through $5 bill

how to edge
---lost & safe?

this entertainment
hunt’s
---not it

5 comments:

  1. absolutely fantastic quick jabs to the eyes, words cut back to just what is needed, pain never felt so good

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  2. Thanks for the comments, Mark and Kate. :)

    I only noticed after posting them that by sheer coincidence the titles of the last 3 pieces rhyme...

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  3. I can relate to this piece, though I think I'll be licking my perceived failures off the back of a copper nickel platypus shortly.

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  4. Hmmm... I think I have an old $1 note stashed away somewhere... ;)

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