In the dream of the blood-sea,
slowly, slowly, Poseidon
pulling the strands within the ocean night,
Webbing all together
in a dance of lunar light
through the streaks of stars reflected.
Then at dawn Poseidon emerges, ravaged by the oceans,
his hair striated with sticking sands,
the once-proud trident warped and rusted.
His night-blind charioteering through the depths,
their onslaught of saline wet,
has left Poseidon shrivelled, shell-brittle, bloody.
Aye, tis true: he bleeds...
Not even the oceans could whittle such stagnant gore away,
and letting lifeblood was misery for a once unscratchable god;
now glimpsing mortality, crying blood from the eyes...
These eyes had been a miniature for the dance
of his domain across the earth, and the water
through which Olympia was dreamt;
Now even these spectres of memory had deserted -
and only the haul of death remained,
to clutch Poseidon to his final bed.
Friday, February 25, 2005
Poseidon
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This is an older poem (circa 1997) which I have recently revised for inclusion here. I still consider this to be a work in progress, and something of a stylistic departure. The tone is perhaps too overblown, and dare I say it, wordy! (Haha) The overdose of adjectival clauses needs to be addressed.
ReplyDeleteOverblown... I think of Melville in Moby Dick proclaiming the magnitude of his subject matter... the whale and the sea-god perhaps being interchangeable as nodes of seeing.
Made a few more changes today.
ReplyDeleteTorched a few adjectives.
Still needs some hard graft!
From recent email to a poet friend: "I hacked at ['Poseidon'] the other day and now it's in even more pain. May need to be put down."
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