tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8165813.post6237670171188098141..comments2023-10-15T20:24:28.219+11:00Comments on a collection of thoughs: snow/shy (2009)Stuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17856424693319815534noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8165813.post-1720707800001657492009-07-07T10:29:38.185+10:002009-07-07T10:29:38.185+10:00Dana: thanks! I hadn't written a poem with thi...Dana: thanks! I hadn't written a poem with this kind of form for a while. Sometimes it's hard to say whether content drives form or form drives content during the composition process. I guess it's not a simple binary of cause/effect anyway. Forms tend to form themselves while I write...<br /><br />Mariana: I'm glad you like it. It has been quite a prolific few days. This poem was loosely based on a conversation I had recently.Stuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17856424693319815534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8165813.post-10410752755040607772009-07-06T20:28:46.777+10:002009-07-06T20:28:46.777+10:00This is my favourite poem of the last that you wro...This is my favourite poem of the last that you wrote all together in just a few theys, this is perfect, I want to get off xanax myselfMariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8165813.post-64306301388130547922009-07-06T12:01:29.792+10:002009-07-06T12:01:29.792+10:00I love how the form of the poem and the breaks wit...I love how the form of the poem and the breaks within the lines create tension and hesitations in this poem.Danahttp://mygorgeoussomewhere.orgnoreply@blogger.com